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review Aeon Legion J.P. Beaubien ↠ 0 Free download Aeon Legion Free download ´ 100 Time travel has made the Edge of Time a dangerous place To protect the Edge of Time from the disastrous alterations of time travelers the Aeon Legion seeks the greatest soldiers and warriors from the most bloody war torn eras in history Those they deem worthy gain a chance to compete in the toughest training program ever designedTerra Mason a plain eighteen year old girl from the modern United States has an impressive stu. I found out about this author and book through his YouTube channel of bad writing advice which unlike the name suggests is good writing advice Lots of sarcasm and wit making fun of standard tropes in many different genres though typically YA What attracted me most about this book was the synposis and the twist of the third paragaph Typically you ll see the monoamorous couples described with each having their own paragraph but no he s a Nazi he s her enemy and that s hilarious Although the synopsis is a bit misleading as at no point does Hanns ever try proving Nazis were heroes nor was he all that confused about people referring to him as a monster He just a normal Nazi who thought what he was doing was just and that Germany should winPerhaps I inadvertantly led myself to have higher than usual expectations but the book is rathernot good It just feels a bit awkward since I feel the uality of his videos is so high it s a bit of a surprise to see this book written as it isIt starts off in a library with our heroine Terra coming face to face with the Nazi antagonist of the book Hanns The awkward wording kind of threw me off It gets going immediately which was a little jarring but otherwise would ve been okay if it wasn t so telly instead of showyI thought perhaps only this first initial scene would ve been like that which would ve been rather interesting to see play out We get told the action and find out the characters perspectives on it later But no this trend persists the entirety of the book It s 100% telling and not showing That s one of the biggest and most well known trope of bad writing of all I m just shocked that the author had this problemIt s frustrating in general to read a book that tells you everything without showing but it feels all the frustrating coming from someone who gives out writing advice and good advice at thatSo much happens to our main character but we never get any sort of real reaction from her There is a sentence or a couple words here and there but nothing that feels impactful emotional genuine or lastingShe s approached by Silverwind a protector of time with a job offer of monumental proportions guarding time itself And how does she react Barely at all Perhaps a little shocked confused but other than that I have no idea I m not even told thatShe ends up accepting the offer of course and I was curious to see how the author would handle the parents ButI am a bit confused Terra literally tells her parents what she s doing and we never see their reaction They were apparently okay with it and she sends them an update after she leaves on her ventures then later comes home at the end like it s no big deal and her parents are just chill with it I know it s a little detail and YAs are NOTORIOUS for dropping the parents but this was such adrop Just a weird way to go about itThe main character in general is mind boggling ignorant and plain stupid She s always shocked of every new piece of information she hears regardless if it should come at a surprise any It s like she doesn t have the ability to remember things or logically deduce thingsTerra Blinked A thousand years You re that oldVita sighed Why do they always find that surprisingTerra knew the Saturnians were older than they appeared but she had no idea they were that oldYou were literally told that those people were immortal and you re just as shocked every time you hear someone s ageTerra just looked confusedTerra raised an eyebrow I m confusedLiterally one sentence in between separates thatMost of the descriptions in this book stem from the environment or the appearances of people As an example the character Lycus We re introduced with him mostly being in shadow glaring eyes and when he smiles that wolf like grin as we re reminded every time he smiles which is often it creeps Terra out But why Just what was it that made him so immediately scary to her We re told she s afraid of him and that she tries her best to avoid him but we re never told why What is her thought process behind her fear What aspects of him what sort of presence does he give off that s so frightening We re constantly told he s scary and intimidating without actually seeing him do anything scary or intimdating view spoilerAt least not until a bit later but that doesn t excuse the nagging reminders of it earlier with nothing to back them up or explain them I did enjoy the concept of his three faces though each with their own name and personality but it bothered me to have so many characters mis naming him while he was in his Lycus face form whateveryoucallit hide spoiler

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review Aeon Legion J.P. Beaubien ↠ 0 Free download Aeon Legion Free download ´ 100 Bborn streak Her persistence and bravery gains the notice and sponsorship of one of the Aeon Legion's greatest heroines Now Terra must turn that stubbornness into determination if she is to contend with history's finest soldiers and somehow pass the Aeon Legion's final test the mysterious Labyrinth She will not uit Terra will prove that even someone as average as her can still be a heroineHanns Speer is polite good nature. This book is entertaining enough and has some interesting ideas The author has a great sense of humor and a good grasp on how to play around with tropes to mess with your expectations The writing is a little on the amateurish side which is perfectly understandable and forgivable for an author s first published work I believe it was self published but I could be wrong It does seem to be a lot better edited than the average self published book All in all I really enjoyed it Is it the best book I ve ever read Nope Is it the worst Nope Was it fun entertaining and memorable Yeah I think that it was Also to any perspective writers out there I highly recommend that you check out this author s youtube series Terrible Writing Advice where he gives some very valuable writing advice in a pretty humorous manner

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review Aeon Legion J.P. Beaubien ↠ 0 Free download Aeon Legion Free download ´ 100 D charming a genius inventor of a time travel machine and a dedicated member of the Nazi Party Yet he cannot understand why people from the future regard him and his fellow Nazis as monsters Now he must use his charisma and cunning to challenge the seemingly invincible Aeon Legion and its monopoly on time travel He will not uit Hanns will steal history itself if he has to mistakenly believing it will prove him to be a her. Plot 45Charcterisation 25 Great characters but JP doesn t show their character enough so that when there are supposed to be emotional moments or punches they don t hit hard enoughWorldbuilding 455 Incredible original world with many cool new ish conceptsThe Mason on the end of her name annoyed meYet I think the author has potential and might improve so I plan to read Best new series I have read in a while Thanks for the new read JP and keep it up


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    (Read) [Aeon Legion] Download Õ PDF, DOC, TXT or eBook ↠ J.P. Beaubien J.P. Beaubien ↠ 0 Free download I found out about this author and book through his YouTube channel of bad writing advice which unlike the name suggests is good writing advice Lots of sarcasm and wit making fun of standard tropes in many different genres though typically YA What attracted me most about this book was the synposis and the twist of the third paragaph Typically

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    (Read) [Aeon Legion] The author has given such great ; writing advice on youtube that I'll have to see how it translates to his actual

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    (Read) [Aeon Legion] Aeon Legion Labyrinth is an enjoyable read I found it to have very compelling world building with great depth and history It is a fantastic mixture of Harry Potter and Divergent from how it feltmoved not from the setting The characters were interesting and the premise of the book drew me in The style prose can be clunky at times but I got used to it by the end Be forewarned that there are some spelling and p

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    Download Õ PDF, DOC, TXT or eBook ↠ J.P. Beaubien J.P. Beaubien ↠ 0 Free download (Read) [Aeon Legion] This book is entertaining enough and has some interesting ideas The author has a great sense of humor and a good grasp on how to play around with tropes to mess with your expectations The writing is a little on the amateurish side which is perfectly understandable and forgivable for an author's first published

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    (Read) [Aeon Legion] Download Õ PDF, DOC, TXT or eBook ↠ J.P. Beaubien review Aeon Legion This book was written by the Terrible Writing Advice guy on Youtube After reading this book I can say that he followed his own advice up to the part where the plot is neededI'll give you a brief blurb Terra attacks time travelling Nazis and

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    (Read) [Aeon Legion] This book was forced all of it Over the top clumsy obvious Examples The whole heroism as a concept theme Don't get me wrong it is a gr

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    (Read) [Aeon Legion] I put this book down at around 53%What I LikedFirst I have to give regards to Beaubien's YouTube account Terrible Writing

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    Download Õ PDF, DOC, TXT or eBook ↠ J.P. Beaubien J.P. Beaubien ↠ 0 Free download (Read) [Aeon Legion] Plot 45Charcterisation 25 Great characters but JP doesn't show their character enough so that when there are supposed to b

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    (Read) [Aeon Legion] Warning This review contains spoilersRight off the bat I just want to say I really enjoyed reading this bookI liked the main character and her transformationcharacter development throughout the book was well executed I was very impressed and h

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    (Read) [Aeon Legion] I found this book not long after stumbling across the author's YouTube Channel To put my opinion of the book in one sentence it's One

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  • Paperback
  • 422
  • Aeon Legion
  • J.P. Beaubien
  • English
  • 25 September 2020
  • 978152372022